Translate

Wednesday, December 19, 2012

Express It... final draft for english essay. 12/19/12


 Dallice Johnson
Mr. Gowans
Language Arts 12
December 13, 2012

Express It

The book Anthem by Ayn Rand is the story of Equality 7-2521, who lives in a society which is striving to destroy all individuality and inequality, therefore causing the community to revert back to times without the technology we have today. Not only do they live without such utilities as phones, cars and even light bulbs but they are forbidden to think about them for they are called the creations of the “unmentionable times.” The society leaders went so far in trying to remove individualism from the community as to take names away. Equality discovered a hole in the ground one day, and tunnel left over from the “Great Rebirth” (where they burned everything from the unmentionable times) and spent much time there. It was there he found the elements he needed to create what is known today as a light bulb. This would be considered to be a serious transgression in the eyes of the council, yet Equality 7-2521 was shocked to find out that the council was not impressed with this discovery. In return they threatened horrid consequences for his sins. Equality was forced to run away, light in hand, so that he and his invention could live and progress. He was followed by a girl, Liberty 5-3000 (The Golden One) they had been friends -despite the fact it was a transgression to have any preference- in the life he had known before his escape. As they traveled together through the Uncharted Forest they fell in love, a feeling no one the the society had known until then. Although the world council made every effort to enforce equality among the members it became apparent that Equality 7-2521 had a need to exercise his individuality. In the same sense that Jonas, from The Giver (by Lois Lowry) learns that equality in his society is not as great as it looks. Jonas grew up thinking all was well in his community, he had an accepting family unit, he liked his schooling and enjoyed the volunteer hours he performed each day. After accepting his assignment as the new Receiver, he gained the knowedge of many pleasures that he had never known because the society had forgotten the times and memories from before the creation of this perfect society. Jonas learns of love and what its like to feel love, he then learns that at home with his family unit he cannot feel the love of his family. Love is not something they know. Jonas then comes to love the baby, Gabe who stays with them. Release is a term the use for the old, weak, or sinners; Jonas always thought it to be a good, noble term and must be a noble action that takes place. Release, taught to all citizens as a wonderful and beautiful thing, because of the new responcibilities Jonas comes to find that it’s a lie told to every member. Release is simply the forced death of a citizen.  Jonas decides that the community has the wrong idea about perfect. He and the Giver collaborate a plan to change the society so that the could know of the pain as well as pleasures of the past. Jonas learned that expressing his individuality is part of life. Both The Giver and Anthem show proof that expressing Individuality is essential, even if it promotes inequality.

An expression of individuality is an important aspect in life without it everyday life turns to chaos and havoc. In our very own society we can see the proof of the aforementioned statement, think for a moment of high school students being forced to conform to a school dress code or behavior policy. How often are the students rebellious against regulations and policies set by superiors. The truth is people need to have the ability to express themselves. Take for instance, the novel Anthem, that ability was taken from the members of the society. Equality 7-2521 had found the tunnel and is explaining how he feels about his new transgression, “We are false in the eyes of our brothers... yet there is no shame in us and no regret” (Rand 36-37). Not only does Equality 7-2521 rebel against the society by choosing to continue visiting the tunnel he also knows he is wrong in doing so but does not care enough to change to conform to the guidelines of his community. Without the permission to express himself Equality 7-2521 turned to a life of hiding and secrets with deepened his lies and rebellion, In life it is necessary to have the ability to express individuality.

A lack of individuality creates a wall for progression; in both novels it is apparent that their strife for equality limits their access to technology. Anthem proves this easily; their society is limited to a maximum technology of candlesticks. Although the community in The Giver is much more advanced than Anthem they both lack the technology of today. Jonas and his family unit along with the rest of the community members ride bicycles for their transportation rather than a car such as we use today. Progress in society derives from ideas, originally ideas must come from an individual. Equality tries to use his idea to better his society, but when he presents his idea for progress in technology with a light bulb to the World Council of Scholars they shut him down saying, “How dared you think that your mind held greater wisdom” (Rand 71).Without the ability to express individuality no progression can take place in any society.

Strife for equality is like looking for dry ground beneath the ocean’s surface. There have been countless attempts to be rid of inequality. Examples include but are not limited to the Extermination of the Jews, Soviet Russia and even our present day “Obama-care,” All of which either have failed or will shortly. This because of one simple truth, true equality is unobtainable. Another example being The Giver, the society created in this book is thought to be perfect, equal and unstoppable. Even in this world (supposedly completely equal) there is flaw. It is stated by one of the elders at the ceremony of twelve “We acknowledge differences. You elevens have spent all your years till now learning to fit in… but today we honor your differences” (Lowry 51-52). An Elder,  leader of this equal society states that there are differences even in their community. It is inevitable, where there are people, differences are found. There is no possible way to create true equality. Along with the perfect society in The Giver, we also have the perfect society in Anthem, where it is considered a transgression to acknowledge differences or show preferences, but of course they cannot escape the differences, each person is given an individual job to serve the community. In order to create complete sameness among the citizens it would be necessary for everyone to have the same job, perform the same tasks and that would simply be ridiculous and useless. Neither book showed success in sameness because it is an impossible request.

Equality seems like a wonderful idea to some, looks good on paper. The truth is, equality is not fantastic in reality. Individuality promotes a healthy environment, allows progress in a society and is important to have a successful community. Demanding equality ensures a period of rebellion from each member of the society. Even the closest attempt at equality does not compare to the true definition of equality because equality is not obtainable. Although individuality diminishes equality, it is an essential part to life and must be preserved in order for a society at large including each individual to prosper.

 

 

 

 

 

Works Cited

Lowry, Lois. The Giver. New York: Dell Laurel-Leaf, 1993. Print.

Rand, Ayn. Anthem. Student Edition. New York: Penguin Group, 1961. Print.

blog post 13

Another poem for make up work.
When I first met you
I felt like I had known you forever,
telling you my secrets
and what I didn't want ever.
you listened to me
I bet you thought I'd never end,
who would have thought
we would become more than just friends.
Over a period of time,
I got to know the real you.
A boy so caring and gentle,
with a heart so true.
You've survived your life
with hurt and loneliness by your side.
I told you I'd never leave
because of the feelings I have inside.
I know you
like no one I have ever known,
and sometimes I wonder
what I'd do if you were gone?
So I have decided
time answers all.
If it is meant to be
time will remove the wall.
I love the way we are together,
you can always make me smile.
Will it ever really be forever?
I guess I will have to wait awhile.
Time will reveal, what lies ahead
but always remember
what I have said.
Meeting you has changed my life
and I really love you so,
the feelings I feel for you
I am never letting go.
Remember me always
and I will too.
I always think of
me and you

Source: When I First Met You, A Love Poem For Him, I Know You http://www.familyfriendpoems.com/poem/when-i-first-met-you#ixzz2FWngfThT
www.FamilyFriendPoems.com

make up work for my missing post #12

Eyes turned as I peeked through the door to my Algebra class. The teacher stood and directed the students attention to the door upon my arrival. "Class, this is EmmaRae Atwood, of Blue Springs, Georgia." The students stared with disapproval, I glanced down seeing my boots, tan legs and light cut off shorts. Suddenly becoming embarrassed as I realize that California does take a liking to southern gals like me. Tears welled in my eyes as I took my seat near the front of the class room. I was surrounded by girls wearing "Prada" and "Bebe" whatever that is. All the boys in this class room were dressed in clothing I had only seen in movies and T.V. shows about rich stuck up snobs. Every person around me (including the kind lady teacher that introduced me) in this school looked like they had walked straight out of a runway magazine. I definitely didn't belong here.
Walking to my Advanced English class seemed to be the most miserable and drug out walk of shame. Stares from teachers and students pierced through me. What kind of forsaken Barbie/Ken Doll was this? How was it that so many smart beautiful and wealthy teens lived so close together and all came to Berkley Hall Academy? The halls in this school were perfectly lit, all the lockers perfectly uniform. I felt as though I had been moved to some sort of flawless utopia. At that moment I missed my home on the farm. I missed waking every morning to the crow of a rooster at day light. Everything that had been my life before was now morphed into this fairytale NIGHTMARE. A week ago I would have never guessed I would be going to a private (on campus only) school.
Days passed and nothing changed. Stares came in with the no decrease in number. After two weeks of feeling out of place I woke up in my dorm one day and looked in the mirror. The gal with freckles staring back at me reminded to much of the kids at school, even i was unimpressed with my reflection. I raced to the on campus market place. I stacked my basket with ribbon, makeup, and jeans.... To Be Continued

Wednesday, December 12, 2012

This Journey is Our Journey. weekly blog post=make up work #11

    Hmmmm, this is a poem I wrote. I am going to use it as my weekly blog post for the week after Thanksgiving because I am missing that week and the next week so here is one make up assignment. (be prepared, my poem doesn’t rhyme.)
I have tried, but I never seem to get things quite right.
My mistakes never began with poor intentions, yet my guidance to each situation have been all but successful.
Tears and heartache have become the products of my works, my sorry and pitiful excuses of works.
My failures are great, but no more, I refuse to let myself fail This Journey.
This Journey is to be enjoyed, not one to further cause my distress, pain and weakness.
I cannot lose, I refuse.
This Journey is a promise to my happiness, and my promise of success.
My joy will come only from that triumphant day as I stand among the success of my persistance.
This Journey ensures my hope and happiness.
It is now my only goal, I am not afraid to admit that I am allowing myself to become entirely consumed by this new obsession, This Journey.
I will remain unashamed as I proclaim This Journey is my passion.
This journey became and will forever be mine.
I love This Journey, every moment of it.
My times of worry, my times of doubt all vanished when This Journey began.
You, My Journey, are my happiness.
I know I make mistakes, most of which are completely crazy.
For that I am sorry.
I am learning to be better though, learning from you.
And eventually my persistence will pay off, my attempts are something worth our time, not like my past failures.
I will not deny my failure are great in number.
Yet, I will not allow myself to fail this time, you are my strength, hope and every moment of my happiness.
I will not fail This Journey, because, I love you Cody.
This Journey means everything--you mean everything.
And This Journey will not end without a smile resting upon both of our faces.
I will not give up on This Journey
This is Our Journey.

THE END:)